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Monday, 4 May 2020

Block Buster Movie

I had to pick a type of movie horror,fantasy and action and adventure. I choose action and adventure my characters were Jake, Jimmy and Aliens. The story was about Jake and Jimmy playing video games at Jimmy's house. They got board playing video games so they decided to play at the park. I had 2 settings for the story one at the park and one about the aliens trying to abduct them. I had 3 story planners about the story and a language features.

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  1. Mr Terry MitchellMay 14, 2020 3:10 pm

    Hi Caleb
    Good work on this planning. I particularly like your description of the aliens: "They like flying around in their UFOs stealing children". I also liked that the boys' first response was throwing sticks at the aliens. Gosh if it was that easy to defeat aliens we wouldn't need Will Smith!
    I think your resolution needs a bit of work, because it just ends without the good guys winning.
    Otherwise, this looks really good.
    - Mr Mitchell

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