I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Friday, 28 May 2021
Pink shirt day t-shirt
In class i had to make a pink shirt that had to do with pink shirt day. I had to colour the shirt in then add a speach the said, don't be an out-stander
Good to see you've blogged and posted a pic to support your text. Please get a teacher or classmate to edit your Blog before you publish, so that your readers find it easy and interesting to read. Can you explain what an outstander is? Is there a reason why you used a lower case 'i' in your first sentence?
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Good to see you've blogged and posted a pic to support your text. Please get a teacher or classmate to edit your Blog before you publish, so that your readers find it easy and interesting to read. Can you explain what an outstander is? Is there a reason why you used a lower case 'i' in your first sentence?
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