I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wednesday, 6 May 2020
Breathless
In reading i made a picture from the journal breathless. I has to pick a key theme from the book and make a picture out of it. My picture was about a rugby field and Asafo holding his inhaler because he has asma.
Hi Caleb Hey this is really good - I think you've really captured the main idea in the journal story. It looks like Asafo is pretty unhappy about his asthma getting in the way of his rugby playing. Well done on this! - Mr Mitchell
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Hi Caleb
ReplyDeleteHey this is really good - I think you've really captured the main idea in the journal story. It looks like Asafo is pretty unhappy about his asthma getting in the way of his rugby playing.
Well done on this!
- Mr Mitchell