I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Thursday, 14 March 2019
the red poem
In writing today we have been writing cooler poems. I liked getting help to write my poem and i have been asking for opines and i should change the words to sentences. And before we did the red poem together.And then i did the red poem on my own.
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In writing today we have been writing cooler poems. I liked getting help to write my poem and i have been asking for opines and i should change the words to sentences. And before we did the red poem together.And then i did the red poem on my own.
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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well.
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say.
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.